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The article is talking about a specific subject. It starts with stating its general characteristics and then proceeds to describe it in more detl. It does this by presenting facts, data, and statistics that support the arguments made. The author also uses examples to illustrate points.
To improve this text into an English version:
The written piece delves into the exploration of a particular subject matter. It initiates with outlining its fundamental trts and subsequently proceeds for a comprehensive explanation through the use of detled information, factual data, and statistical evidence that bolster the arguments put forth. The writer also incorporates illustrative examples to clarify points being made.
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Specific subject becomes particular subject matter, adding specificity while mntning formality.
Describes it in more detl is replaced with proceeds for a comprehensive explanation, which sounds more formal and academic.
Presenting facts, data, and statistics that support the arguments made changes to using detled information, factual data, and statistical evidence that bolster the arguments put forth. This uses phrasing suited for an academic or professional context while still conveying the same meaning.
Uses examples to illustrate points is a more concise way of saying this than originally provided.
The original text seems incomplete with phrases like and then proceeds to describe it in more detl, suggesting there should be additional content that was not included here, e.g., other aspects about the subject being discussed. The improvements also dep on the context assumed for this particular article, which might require different nuances based on the audience and purpose of the text.
more detls or specify a focus if you want further refinement tlored to specific contexts.
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Detailed Analysis of Specific Subject Matter Fundamental Traits Explained Thoroughly Comprehensive Explanation with Data Support Statistical Evidence Strengthening Arguments Authors Examples for Point Clarification In depth Exploration through Academic Framework